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Tuesday, 14 March 2017

Leadership article

In writing I have been learning to use a wide range of punctuation appropriately and with increasing accuracy like . , ! ? “”
- colon :
- semi-colon ;
- hyphen -
- parentheses ( )
- brackets [ ]
- ellipses ...

I have been especially focusing on using parentheses and semi-colon. I have highlighted these in green where I have used them as well as other punctuation that I changed because it was used incorrectly. Here is a piece of my writing that shows this.



I will show theese Leadership by firstly,showing up to my duty on time to demonstrate trustworthiness and show resilience by not giving up and last but not least!;to show active thinking by using multiple strategies.

HERE IS ANOTHER PIECE OF WRITING WHERE I USED PUNCTUATION.

Showing active thinking is very Important.Bill Gates really showed active thinking by.When something would go wrong [not according to plan] he would think to make it better and overall he came up with the idea of Microsoft.


Friday, 2 September 2016

Information report on the water cycle.

The Hydraulic cycle,also known as the water cycle,is the process of water going through land,ocean and atmosphere.The water cycle is also a process that round and round to create water for us to use in everyday life, and without it we wouldn't be alive or else severally  sick.The water cycle comes in three different forms through out the water cycle process liquid,gas and solid.


Evaporation:
Evaporation is simply where liquid/water,turns into a vapor gas,[going up is most likely greater on a hot day.]
because warm air can hold more moisture, why? because it is just that;at higher temperatures water molecules are more likely to go in the water phase,so there will be more water vapor in the air in a hot day.
Another point, is that in some arid climates, sometimes ice (solid particles.) can turn into a cloud vapor ; this is quite common in dry arid climates.After, this step is completed,the next step is condensation followed by precipitation.

Condensation and Precipitation are yet another major steps in the water cycle.condensation is the cloud forming stage.If the vapor cools to 0 degrees ; it will start to condense as water and will start to fall when.when a drop/droplet is big enough gravity will start to pull it down ; this step in the water cycle is called Precipitation. If the water temperature gets called in the sky it can cause hail or snow if not it will just rain.Also cool temperatures is good for condensation because as long as the temperatures are cool in the atmosphere it can hold the vapor and delay condensation. After condensation, and Precipitation, Runoff and groundwater are next, as Precipitation has fallen for runoff to do its thing. 


Monday, 11 April 2016

my exposition.

w.a.l.t: follow the writing process to write and exposition.
this is my conclusion for my exposition.

my leaders:  Sir Edmund Hillary and Barack Obama



Overall I think both leaders are excellent leaders.But overall in my own opinion I think Sir Edmund Hillary is the best leader.because of all the the trait he shows e.g resilience/goal focused/active thinker plus his other strengths.And any way every president needs to be the best of the best.And sir Edmund Hillary really motivates people even me.